Comatose ch00 pg44by ~chicken-blast

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Oh boy. Billy doesn't seem to like the principal. Angstplosion occurs.
Also, Mrs Simmons and Jack should be friends.

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~Fallen-Sun Mar 1, 2012 Student Traditional Artist

ok, i just wanna say how much i'm enjoying this so far. It's 2 AM here, and i planned to go to be a while ago, but you've kept me up. The style it's drawn in currently is pretty cool. It has a nice mix of sketchy energy and clean, stylized line work. I think you should keep it like this, though it feels like there are less backgrounds recently than there were in the beginning. I'm looking forward to more of those. Also, adding in that grey in addition to black and white is really great too.

I love the character development, though i feel like establishing Joey as a villain a little more before he's revealed as a friend would have been nice. Doesn't matter now since it's already done, and it's a minor detail. I'm dying to know what's going on, so imma keep reading and hate myself in the morning.

I'll bet you thought i was kinda stupid up till now, huh? XD

~chicken-blast Mar 2, 2012 Student General Artist

No man I actually thought 'this guy commented on everything he must be Devonition's twin'.
Thanks for the feedback man, I really appreciate it. And yeah don't worry about backgrounds, I love drawing them ;D